Walt: write a narrative
Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.
Once upon a time me and my friend went to a cave when we got there it was smelly and dirty and my friend name was Jeff John and jake. They was having fun in the cave .
The cave was under the ground it was schery and They was excited. When they saw a big rook they couldn't get out they was scared and hungry. Suddenly they all worked as a team and they all found their way out and when they got home they were cold and they had a hot shower and when we finished they still smell like pou and they had to sleep outside.