Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.
I was kayaking and I saw a long waterfall and I when I got there I fall out of the bot. when I got in the water. opened my eye and I saw a shark and It was swimming to me because it was hungry And I was was swimming away I was scared . My friend was there and It was at mission bay and my friend name was Jezakaia and Leonardy and Leite. I was saved by jezakaia. When I got out of the water I was freezing.It was on monday morning I was cold and my hart was bebeing fast.
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