Introduction: Hook, the 4 W’s
Paragraph 1: What is Athletics Day? Which house were you in?
Paragraph 2: What types of sports and events were there?
Paragraph 3: What was your favourite event or part of the day?
Paragraph 3: What was your favourite event or part of the day?
Conclusion: Reflect: Do you think you did well? Did your friends do well? What did you think about the whole day?
Start writing here….
Last week we had athletics day we did some activities it was so fun we had tug-o-war, javelin,discus,shot put, dodgeball, target ball, volleyball,relays and sprints they were all cool activities. I was in hinemoana that color is blue blue is the best color
it was at pt england school it is a very nice school our first activity was volleyball it goes no and no to the end and at the end of athletics the teachers race the kids the kids won the race because the teachers are slow.
Me and my friend was so happy and nervous my friend name is kohatu and we were so happy and so proud that we had a turn.
My whole day was so fun and so cool I was so happy and excited.
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