WALT: create mood in our writing.
I was on the podium at the Olympics. I saw my mum and dad cheering for me and my family. I heard people cheering from another country and the people beside me.
When I was standing there a man gave me a handshake and me my medal. I got a cool medal. I had to stand on the podium. I felt very proud of myself and my parents felt proud of me to.
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ReplyDeleteHi Arthur Your Writing is very interesting but post some more
ReplyDeleteHi Arthur i like your picture writing but remember to put in captials and fullstops.
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