Walt: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
Early on Monday morning Mr Bax class went to the park for an egg race. We had a egg 20 meter race because we are lenning about olympics.We have to draw a face on our egg. I drawed a big eye and a big mouth. He came from china and his name was Jeff.We all lined up and put our Egg on the spoon. We had to go over one thing and under one thing. Then we had to run to the end of the park and Run back. I ran super fast and cracked my egg because someone pushed me and I cracked it and picked it up and i ran back and it was yuck. If you cracked the egg you had to put it in the bin if you didn't you have to put it in the tray of eggs.I really enjoy my day and my favourite part was cracking my egg and putting it in the bin.
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